This piece was written for my creative writing class. And it is actually "chapter two" since there is another part (the story of the girl the main character meets) but I'm not as happy as I am with this piece as I am with that one. Plus, the one I'm posting can stand alone by itself. Maybe I'll post "chapter one" if anybody is interested (and when ( Read more... )

I thought I'd post my creative writing assignment here for critique, hoping somebody will read this. It's a 200-400 word assignment, writing a short scene that could serve on its own or be a part of a bigger story and written for children and young adults.

Well, I have some problems with the 'plot' or lack there of. I also feel like the ending is ( Read more... )